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June 12, 2018 by Carol Rojas Ramirez

By: Carol Rojas Ramirez

We all go to Tech so we’re all smart in one way or another. Some are brainiacs who will be solving crazy physics and math problems to design aircrafts and power plants. Others are brilliant strategists who will one day lead the World Bank or Wall Street.

Bottom line is, we all have expectations of what we want to do with our lives. Whether it originates from parental pressure, or the exceedingly high standards that you’ve set for yourself (I see you, my overachievers), or the standard of becoming a great something once you graduate from this Institution. I’m not going to lie, I feel it all the time. But honestly, I have come to believe that my fear of failure is not from being afraid of not becoming a doctor or lawyer or engineer, but rather not becoming the person I have always wanted to be, and I think that it has a lot to do with how I was raised and where I come from.

I am a first-generation immigrant. I was raised by single mother who never needed to speak twice to get her point across and had high expectations of me since I was in grade school. Even though she doesn’t have a fancy job, I fancy her a successful woman in her own right. And more than anything, I aim to be that woman, a resilient, independent, and well-educated woman. I think that a lot of women, like my mother, have lived through unimaginable struggles  but sadly, their stories have been lost in translation or never even been heard. But I know that they have raised strong and amazing men and women who have become leaders, teachers, scientists, etc… However, their mothers’ stories are never told. We could go on and on about the ambition of our founding fathers, which I am thankful for, but I also think that we should be talking about the women who didn’t have a voice in this period of time, particularly immigrant women and minority women living throughout the world. The women who endured so much, the women who fought conventions, those who gave so much of themselves to raise the future of America and of this world. That would be a hell of a musical. 

Rachel Faucette’s story is inspiring and highly underrated. After all, we didn’t even hear about her at all in the play. However, I do praise Lin-Manuel Miranda’s efforts in making this musical so diverse- not just with race but also in how he used his artistic license to make this such a pro-female musical.  There is no proof that Angelica was the strong, brilliant woman, struggling to be heard that Lin-Manuel Miranda presents in Hamilton. However, the underlying feminist tones in this play are inspiring. 

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Entry 2: Research is Rough

June 4, 2018 by Carol Rojas Ramirez

By: Carol Rojas Ramirez

Hey there! If you haven’t checked out my Transcription entry, you totally should. It’s on the Reynolds Pamphlet, which is the historical document that I will be using for my annotation project. This Pamphlet was written by our very own Alexander Hamilton when his lover’s husband (James Reynolds) threatened his political career by falsely accusing him of embezzling funds (I know… it’s kind of crazy).

Of course, since Hamilton had beef with literally everyone, the Pamphlet caught many peoples’ attention and it had a lasting impact on his career.  

I was really interested by the document primarily because of the amount of drama that has surrounded it for years. Now that I’ve started doing research on the background, I have found so many more conspiracy theories and stories that explain this bizarre time in Hamilton’s life. More importantly, I have found that a lot of the stuff surrounding the Pamphlet isn’t just cheap gossip but a window into the political and socioeconomic climate of the time. It has been interesting and rather entertaining learning about the blackmail plot and questioning Maria’s involvement in the whole scheme but when you really start reading the document, you start to wonder who James Reynolds was and if he considered Hamilton as an enemy (politically, not just because he was sleeping with his wife). This got me deeper into the political factions of the time as well as Hamilton’s time as the Treasury Secretary. Unfortunately, it has been rather difficult to find primary sources that provide some insight into these topics. There are certainly many articles out there that give you a run-down on the affair and what they think really happened between the three people but there are not documents in which Hamilton describes his time as the Treasury Secretary. Yes, there are many finance and economics journals that describe Hamilton’s ideas and how they have shaped the nation, but they don’t provide specific detail as to how this affected his personal life. Getting any insight into James Reynolds was even worse. This is the stuff that I found on Google Scholar:  

 

Moving forward, I am going to try to do some more reading of Chernow’s Alexander Hamilton as he provides good summaries of the occurrences in during this time in Hamilton’s life. I also think that it will be a good jumping off point for my research. I think that if I can read summaries and then try to get more information on a specific topic, like the Federalists and the Anti-Federalist factions, I’ll be able to piece the different details together to understand the Reynolds Pamphlet a bit better.  

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Blog Entry One: Repetition, Repetition, Repetition

May 29, 2018 by Carol Rojas Ramirez

By: Carol Rojas Ramirez

There are many different themes that make up Hamilton’s first act. I think that one of the many literary methods that Lin-Manuel Miranda utilizes to get these themes across is repetition. We see this occur not just in individual songs but across multiple songs in the first act (and of course, in the second act). This form of repetition that expands across the entire musical links the different stories together in a way that provides the listener/viewer with a broad understanding of not just the period’s history but also a character study on Alexander Hamilton.

 

I know… I’ve read a lot of other blog posts and everyone is talking about repetition, but it’s something to be studied because it’s such an integral part of this musical. A lot of the repetition, as I mentioned, has to do with Hamilton’s characterization. In a broader sense,  we understand that this story is about an ambitious man who was his own worst enemy. Throughout different songs, we get an idea as to why this is true. We start out with the first song where we get the repetition of his name, but then we move on to songs like Aaron Burr Sir, and Satisfied where we get phrases like “Just You Wait”, which help the viewer/listener understand Hamilton’s visions of grandeur and his eagerness to be the best. He says this repeatedly, which shows us that he knows he’s smart and talented and that he could be the best, but it also shows us that he doesn’t know when to shut up about it. From the first couple of songs, we get the gist… Hamilton wants it all and he wants it now. And he’s going to tell everyone until they hear him. The fact that he is so arrogant with his opinions is what is going to lead to Hamilton’s downfall (we see this with the repetition of the line, “Talk less, smile more”). Here is a good place to state that “Just you wait” is a phrase that sets the tone for the foiling that will happen between Burr and Hamilton. While Hamilton uses that line, we hear Burr say, “Wait for it”, something that provides further characterization for both Hamilton and Burr.

All these lines, which are repeated throughout, help us understand Hamilton’s ambition and his overwhelming desire to become his own man. After immigrating to New York, Hamilton views the war as a personal problem. He is eager to fight for something that he wishes will be his. He wants a home, a family, and friends (he’s basically a millennial). All these elements provide insight into the quintessential story of an immigrant. The phrase, “New York” is mentioned multiple times in many songs including, My Shot, Alexander Hamilton, and Helpless. In many ways, it is providing a setting for the characters that is familiar to the viewer. It is easy to picture sailing ships coming towards the Statue of Liberty as well as to hum the familiar, Empire State of Mind song by Jay-Z and Alicia Keys.

As we will soon find out, however, Hamilton’s eagerness, the fact that he works himself to death (as mentioned throughout the song, Best of Wives and Best of Women), and that he never shuts up is what will be his downfall. His own ambition is his downfall. It is interesting because one of the many phrases we hear throughout the musical is “Rise Up” which is inspiring to hear, not just for the poor immigrants like Hamilton but also the colonies. However, this also provides foreshadowing of the rise and fall of a great man.

The thing is, a lot of the songs’ themes are not entirely about Hamilton nor the Revolutionary War but also touch on deeper issues such as gun violence, feminism, the Black Lives Matter movement, among others.

 

 

 

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Excerpt from the “Reynolds Pamphlet”

May 26, 2018 by Carol Rojas Ramirez

By:  Carol Rojas Ramirez

I found this excerpt in the National Archives Database.

Transcription:

A principal engine, by which this spirit endeavours to accomplish its purposes is that of calumny. It is essential to its success that the influence of men of upright principles, disposed and able to resist its enterprises, shall be at all events destroyed. Not content with traducing their best efforts for the public good, with misrepresenting their purest motives, with inferring criminality from actions innocent or laudable, the most direct falshoods are invented and propagated, with undaunted effrontery and unrelenting perseverance. Lies often detected and refuted are still revived and repeated, in the hope that the refutation may have been forgotten or that the frequency and boldness of accusation may supply the place of truth and proof. The most profligate men are encouraged, probably bribed, certainly with patronage if not with money, to become informers and accusers. And when tales, which their characters alone ought to discredit, are refuted by evidence and facts which oblige the patrons of them to abandon their support, they still continue in corroding whispers to wear away the reputations which they could not directly subvert. If, luckily for the conspirators against honest fame, any little foible or folly can be traced out in one, whom they desire to persecute, it becomes at once in their hands a two-edged sword, by which to wound the public character and stab the private felicity of the person. With such men, nothing is sacred. Even the peace of an unoffending and amiable wife is a welcome repast to their insatiate fury against the husband.

In the gratification of this baleful spirit, we not only hear the jacobin news-papers continually ring with odious insinuations and charges against many of our most virtuous citizens; but, not satisfied with this, a measure new in this country has been lately adopted to give greater efficacy to the system of defamation—periodical pamphlets issue from the same presses, full freighted with misrepresentation and falshood, artfully calculated to hold up the opponents of the Factionto the jealousy and distrust of the present generation and if possible, to transmit their names with dishonor to posterity. Even the great and multiplied services, the tried and rarely equalled virtues of a Washington, can secure no exemption.

How then can I, with pretensions every way inferior expect to escape? And if truly this be, as every appearance indicates, a conspiracy of vice against virtue, ought I not rather to be flattered, that I have been so long and so peculiarly an object of persecution? Ought I to regret, if there be any thing about me, so formidable to the Faction as to have made me worthy to be distinguished by the plentytude of its rancour and venom?

It is certain that I have had a pretty copious experience of its malignity. For the honor of human nature, it is to be hoped that the examples are not numerous of men so greatly calumniated and persecuted, as I have been, with so little cause.

I dare appeal to my immediate fellow citizens of whatever political party for the truth of the assertion, that no man ever carried into public life a more unblemished pecuniary reputation, than that with which I undertook the office of Secretary of the Treasury; a character marked by an indifference to the acquisition of property rather than an avidity for it.

With such a character, however natural it was to expect criticism and opposition, as to the political principles which I might manifest or be supposed to entertain, as to the wisdom or expediency of the plans, which I might propose, or as to the skill, care or diligence with which the business of my department might be executed, it was not natural to expect nor did I expect that my fidelity or integrity in a pecuniary sense would ever be called in question.

But on his head a mortifying disappointment has been experienced. Without the slightest foundation, I have been repeatedly held up to the suspicions of the world as a man directed in his administration by the most sordid views; who did not scruple to sacrifice the public to his private interest, his duty and honor to the sinister accumulation of wealth.

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Introduction to Carol Rojas Ramirez

May 21, 2018 by Carol Rojas Ramirez

Hey there! I’m Carol Rojas Ramirez (I know, it’s kind of mouthful… just imagine half of your last name cut off in your High School Diploma. I know… I was shocked too).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just kidding… they just omitted the “Ramirez” part. It’s cool I’m totally not salty about it.

Anyways, I’m a second year Industrial Engineering major whose anticipated graduation year is 2021 (crossing my fingers). I’m enrolled in the online version of the class and I’m currently back home in Buford, Georgia. I’m actually taking three other online classes and working part time at a bookstore.  Other than that, my only obligation is tanning and fantasizing about all of the dogs I will be adopting once I graduate.

I took English 1101 last Fall with Dr. Rachel Dean-Ruzicka and had an amazing time learning about murder in America. That class really helped me improve my written communication skills. However, the part that I enjoyed the most was the visual communications aspect. We had to create a movie poster that represented the many ideas we had talked about throughout the course. I don’t fancy myself a creative person, so it was challenging but something I thoroughly enjoyed and hope that I get to do again at some point in my career. We had various projects where we had to speak in front of large audiences, which was very difficult for me do without having tiny anxiety attacks. So that’s something that I hope to work on not just during this class but throughout my time at Tech.

I have heard about Hamilton and how everyone was raving about it for a while but I haven’t heard or listened to it before. I have always despised musicals (hence my hatred for most Disney movies… actually that’s also due to Up).

*cries*

Sorry… I get distracted. But despite my hatred for musicals, I do love hip hop and rap and after listening to some of Lin-Manuel Miranda’s previous work, I am very much looking forward to experiencing Hamilton in its many forms.

As you can tell, I really like gifs and pretending that I have a sense of humor. I also enjoy reading, swimming, cooking, and playing with doggos.

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