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Remix and Adaptation Reflection

July 19, 2018 by Grace Griggs

by Grace Griggs

My proposed project was to write a D&D one-shot adventure inspired by Hamilton stealing cannons from the British, which is briefly mentioned in “Right Hand Man” pretty much like this.

My finished project is very similar to what I proposed, a 18 page pdf containing the written adventure, a map of Fort George, custom enemy stat-blocks and Character sheets for Burr, Hamilton, Lafayette, Laurens and Mulligan.

One of my favorite parts of this project was getting to monkey around with the actual history in order to tell the story I wanted to tell. In reality, only Hamilton and Hercules Mulligan participated, but I wanted to include the whole gang so I did. The cannons at Fort George were completely abandoned, but I wanted to make it more interesting, so I added some British soldiers on guard there. It’s a very cool feeling to make a story how you want it to be.

I found the peer review process very helpful. My biggest worry going in was that the person reviewing me wouldn’t get what I was trying to do, since it’s a little bit out of left field. To try to avoid this I made my draft as close to the finished product as possible. I was glad to see my peer review partner got what I was going for both on purpose and intended audience.

The main change suggested by my peer reviewer was that I add some text explaining D&D because she felt that someone unfamiliar with the game would be unable to play it and fully understand it based on my work alone. This is very valid, but unfortunately I was not able to come up with a good solution. Explaining the game system to the level required would easily double my word count and would possibly be overstepping the boundaries of copyrighted material. The issue is that a module like this is only intended to be read by the person running the game, the GM, and a GM has to have much more knowledge of the game than I can provide for something like this. 

The main changes between my first and final drafts are the addition of custom enemy stat-blocks and substantial editing of the character sheets, along with changing the wording in a few places. In my first draft, rather than providing enemy stats, I simply cited stats from published sources. Adding custom stats allows this adventure to stand on its own more and allowed the combat encounters to fit the Revolutionary time period better. In addition characters were upped from level one to two and a sheet was added for Aaron Burr. These changes combined make the adventure much more playable. Running the combat encounters I describe in my draft without modification would leave almost no chance for the players to actually succeed. They have a pretty good shot now.

Overall I found the review and revision process helpful and am happy with my finished product.

 

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Blog Post 5: Ham4Ham Adaptation Analysis

July 5, 2018 by Grace Griggs

By Grace Griggs

One of my favorite of the Ham4Ham videos we discussed is “The Hamilton Children” where the cast of Fun Home were brought in to play Hamilton’s kids who weren’t featured in the show.

The main purpose of this Ham4Ham is probably just to be cute, but it also affects the tone of the show in an interesting way. Essentially, it is a continuation of Phillip Hamilton’s rap to include his seven siblings, only one of which was even mentioned in the show itself. Hamilton ends with Eliza working to tell Hamilton’s story and memorialize his contributions to the US government. Ultimately, Hamilton’s legacy is his work, just like he wanted it to be. Eliza’s belief that their family would be legacy enough (emphasized in “First Burn” from the Hamilton Mixtape) is never validated because the only one of their children we see dies young. This song changes that, though. Not only did Hamilton have many children, but each of them went on to do interesting, important things. From defending Aaron Burr’s second wife in their divorce to being Secretary of State, the Hamilton children were no slouches. Knowing this, it would be easy to argue that Eliza was right to say Hamilton’s legacy could be his family rather than just his work. Based only on the story of the show, it would be hard to say Hamilton’s legacy was anything other than his work. I think adding this song to the show itself would completely change the tone of the ending.

The mediums of the two pieces are essentially the same, with the main difference being production value, with the Ham4Ham show being live with no music and only one microphone. My main takeaway from this exercise is how the selective inclusion or exclusion of even somewhat unrelated historical details can significantly change the story being told and its tone. For my adaptation, I have to pull from some historical events that the show only briefly brushes over. This means I have freedom to choose what I include and what I leave out. It is important that I carefully consider the overall tone and purpose of my adaptation when I am choosing what to include in it.

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Remix and Adaptation Project Proposal

June 28, 2018 by Grace Griggs

By: Grace Griggs

For my adaptation project, my goal is to add an additional layer of immersion to the show than is already present. I recently read that the writer of 1776 thought the show was an awful idea until he heard the song “Sit Down, John” performed. He explained why that changed his mind, saying that “in that song is the entire fabric and level of the show: You are involved with people whom we’d never dealt with before, except as cardboard figures. This room had flies, it was hot, and these men were not perfect. There’s more information about the Continental Congress in that opening song than I learned in all my years at school”. The same thing goes for Hamilton. Part of its value is that it adds extra layers of immersion to the history. My goal is to create an adaptation that increases the audience’s engagement with the story.

To this end, my plan is to adapt a part of Hamilton’s story into a tabletop roleplaying format, specifically 5th edition Dungeons and Dragons. I would like to make a one-shot (a D&D adventure short enough to be played in one sitting) where players can play as Hamilton, Hercules Mulligan and the rest of the gang as they steal cannons from a British fort, a historical event described in the song “Right Hand Man”. The final product will be a pdf that includes the plot of the adventure, all descriptive text blocks, descriptions of all relevant obstacles and NPCs and enough information to give the players a variety of ways to accomplish their mission. It will also include a battle-map of Fort George and character sheets for Hamilton, Mulligan, Lafayette, Laurens and Burr, although only Hamilton and Mulligan were historically present.

 

The majority of my work will be writing and adapting the relevant rules of D&D to fit the colonial period (add guns, minimize magic etc.). Additionally, I will have to do some historical research to flesh out the events of that night and a little bit of illustration for the map of Fort George.

I am a little nervous about my concept for this project because the two things I am combining are just about as different from each other as possible. However, I do have a good understanding of both the subject matter and the medium I’m converting it to, so I am comfortable that I will be able to work around any issues that arise. Overall, I am very excited to work on this project.

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Washington’s Circular Letter to the States: Annotated

June 26, 2018 by Grace Griggs

There are four things, which I humbly conceive, are essential to the wellbeing[1], I may even venture to say, to the existence of the United States as an Independent Power:

1st. An indissoluble Union of the States under one Federal Head[2].

2dly. A Sacred regard to Public Justice[3].

3dly. The adoption of a proper Peace Establishment[4], and

4thly. The prevalence of that pacific and friendly Disposition, among the People of the United States, which will induce them to forget their local prejudices and policies, to make those mutual concessions which are requisite to the general prosperity, and in some instances, to sacrifice their individual advantages to the interest of the Community[5].

These are the Pillars on which the glorious Fabrick of our Independency and National Character must be supported; Liberty[6] is the Basis, and whoever would dare to sap the foundation, or overturn the Structure, under whatever specious[7] pretexts he may attempt it, will merit the bitterest execration[8], and the severest punishment which can be inflicted by his injured Country[9].

Under the first head, altho’ it may not be necessary or proper for me in this place to enter into a particular disquisition[10] of the principles of the Union, and to take up the great question which has been frequently agitated, whether it be expedient and requisite for the States to delegate a larger proportion of Power to Congress[11], or not, Yet it will be a part of my duty, and that of every true Patriot, to assert without reserve, and to insist upon the following positions, That unless the States will suffer Congress to exercise those prerogatives[12], they are undoubtedly invested with by the Constitution, every thing must very rapidly tend to Anarchy and confusion, That it is indispensable to the happiness of the individual States, that there should be lodged somewhere, a Supreme Power to regulate and govern the general concerns of the Confederated Republic[13], without which the Union cannot be of long duration. That there must be a faithfull and pointed compliance on the part of every State, with the late proposals and demands of Congress, or the most fatal consequences will ensue, That whatever measures have a tendency to dissolve the Union, or contribute to violate or lessen the Sovereign Authority, ought to be considered as hostile to the Liberty and Independency of America[14], and the Authors of them treated accordingly, and lastly, that unless we can be enabled by the concurrence[15] of the States, to participate of the fruits of the Revolution, and enjoy the essential benefits of Civil Society, under a form of Government so free and uncorrupted, so happily guarded against the danger of oppression, as has been devised and adopted by the Articles of Confederation, it will be a subject of regret, that so much blood and treasure[16] have been lavished for no purpose, that so many sufferings have been encountered without a compensation[17], and that so many sacrifices have been made in vain. Many other considerations might here be adduced[18] to prove, that without an entire conformity to the Spirit of the Union, we cannot exist as an Independent Power; it will be sufficient for my purpose to mention but one or two which seem to me of the greatest importance. It is only in our united Character as an Empire, that our Independence is acknowledged[19], that our power can be regarded, or our Credit supported[20] among Foreign Nations. The Treaties of the European Powers with the United States of America, will have no validity on a dissolution of the Union. We shall be left nearly in a state of Nature[21], or we may find by our own unhappy experience, that there is a natural and necessary progression, from the extreme of anarchy to the extreme of Tyranny[22]; and that arbitrary power is most easily established on the ruins of Liberty abused to licentiousness[23].

 

Annotations:

  • The four core concepts Washington outlines in this letter are importance of a strong federal government, paying off the debt accrued by the nation during the war, establishing a well-trained militia in each state and promoting unity between the states despite their differences. Thirteen years later he would echo several of these points in his Farewell Address. There he reemphasizes the importance of balancing the nation’s budget, as well as unity in multiple forms, encouraging it between the states and discouraging the development of political factions and parties. He also praises the Constitution as an improvement on the Articles of Confederation, as it had created the strong federal government he advocated for in this letter (Washington).

 

  • When this letter was written in 1783, the Constitution had not been adopted yet and the government system being used was the Articles of Confederation. The AoC government had no executive branch on the federal level and was instead governed by a congress of representatives from each state. The main functions of the federal government were foreign affairs and minting money, while most other matters were left up to the individual state governments (Samson).

 

  • Although the meaning behind this statement is not immediately obvious to a modern reader, Washington late elaborates on this point, making it clear he is referring to the country’s debt. Both the federal and state governments were in substantial debt to foreign and domestic powers by the end of the war. In 1790, Alexander Hamilton would estimate that the US was $54 million in debt, with about $42 million of that being do domestic creditors (Hamilton).

 

  • It was important to Washington that each state have a well-armed and trained militia. Washington feared that an armed rebellion could uproot the fragile new government unless there was a capable militia to prevent that. Washington’s vision of armed uprising would come to pass twice before his death, in Shays’ Rebellion (1787) and the Whiskey Rebellion (1791-1794). Shays’ Rebellion, prompted by high taxes and a bad harvest year, was successfully quashed by the Massachusetts state militia (Shays’…). The Whiskey Rebellion occurred when Pennsylvania farmers violently protested a newly implemented federal grain tax. Washington himself led an army of 13,000 troops to put down the rebellion and enforce the federal government’s right to taxation that it had recently gained after the ratification of the Constitution (“So, what…”).

 

  • Washington’s fourth point is not so much a concrete policy suggestion as it is an appeal to the people of the United States to put aside their differences and work towards national unity. Today it is taken for granted that the United States is one cohesive nation, but that was not the case during the revolution and the survival of the early United States as an independent nation was far from guaranteed. Differences between urban and rural, north and south made merging the colonies into a unified nation a difficult task (Jaffee).

 

  • Washington’s concept of liberty stemmed from the philosophy of John Locke, an Enlightenment Era thinker generally regarded as the “Father of Liberalism”. Locke believed that a just government could only exist with the consent of the citizens. Locke viewed society as a contract where the citizens agree to obey societal rules in exchange for the security provided by government. Unlike philosopher Thomas Hobbes, Locke believed that people willingly enter this contract and, if the government does not uphold their end, it is within the people’s rights to break the contract through revolution. Governments can fail to uphold the contract by either failing to provide stability or by infringing on the people’s “natural rights”. Locke believed that humans were endowed by God with a set of “natural rights” which are both universal and inalienable, chief among those being “life, liberty and property”. To Locke, unless a government upheld these rights for all its citizen, those citizens would have the right to overthrow that government and establish a new one (Cranston, 85).

 

  • “Specious” Adjective: having a false look of truth, fairness or genuineness (Webster’s…, 888).

 

  • “Execrate” Verb: A. to declare to be evil or detestable B. to detest utterly (Webster’s…, 313).

 

  • The severest punishment a person can receive, capital punishment, has an interesting history in the United States. While in modern times the US is one of the few developed nations to still use the death penalty, its law were comparatively progressive in the colonial era. The use of capital punishment in the pre-revolution colonies and the Articles of Confederation U.S. was largely based on British practices of the time. Leading up to the American Revolution, Britain was steadily increasing the number of crimes that could warrant execution, eventually peaking with 220 different capital crimes. After independence, the laws regarding capital and corporal punishment were not uniform across the states and they have not been since. By 1800 majority of northern states had reduced the number of capital crimes to less than five. On the other hand, many southern states had increased their list of capital crimes, adding many that only pertained to slaves. The mid-19th century saw a thriving death penalty abolitionist movement push for significant reforms and even abolition of the death penalty in some states (Reggio).

 

  • “Disquisition” Noun: a formal inquiry or discussion (Webster’s…, 260).

 

  • The issues of state’s rights and the balance between federal and state power have been present throughout American history. Jefferson Davis, president of the Confederate States of America, used “state’s rights” as an explanation for the South’s secession and the fundamental motivation of Confederate soldiers. Davis held strong to the claim that the Civil War was not motivated by slavery, but by the North and the Federal Government exerting unfair control over the South (Davis). In modern times “state’s rights” arguments have figured prominently in issues as diverse as marijuana legalization and LGBT discrimination laws.

 

  • “Prerogative” Noun: A. a special privilege or advantage B. a right attached to an office, rank or status (Webster’s…, 713).

 

  • Prior to the adoption of the Constitution, the US was considered a confederation of states. A confederation is a union of independent nations or states, all of which have an inherent right to secede from the confederation. This differs from a federation, which is a union of only partially independent states under a weak federal power (“Confederation”). Defining the US as a confederation rather than a federation emphasizes just how little power the federal government held under the Articles of Confederation, although in a pure confederacy there would be no federal government. Principally, the United States was a group of sovereign states voluntarily united for the purpose of achieving a common goal (Batts). There are many historical examples of confederation governments including multiple examples in the pre-colonial Americas (one notable example being the Iroquois) and the Confederacy formed of secessionist states during the Civil War, at least in name. Due to their inherent instability, true confederations are very rare. The closest modern analogue to the Articles of Confederation system is probably the European Union, although it straddles the line between federation and confederation but is not legally classified as either (“Confederation”).

 

  • Here Washington describes any action taken to separate states from the Union or lessen the power of federal sovereignty as hostile to the U.S. itself because, as he has said earlier in this letter, it is essential to the survival of the nation that the states remains unified. Significant conflict between the states or further weakening of the federal government could have spelled the doom of the young nation.

 

  • “Concurrence” Noun: A. agreement in action, opinion or intent B. a coming together (Webster’s…, 185).

 

  • Blood and treasure here refer to the casualties and financial costs of the war, respectively. Throughout the war approximately 4,500 servicemembers were killed and 6,200 were nonfatally wounded, for a total of 10,700 casualties. Casualties made up just under 5% of U.S. servicemembers by the war’s end (US Department…). The financial cost of the war was also significant,

 

  • The word compensation is used very intentionally here. Only three months prior to this letter’s distribution Washington’s officers had raised a petition to mutiny due to inadequate compensation. The officers had not been paid during the war and Congress still had not paid them those wages or given them the pensions they were owed. Washington spoke to these officers in his Newburgh Address where he sympathized with their plight and pledged to help them, but denounced their intentions to mutiny (“Newburgh…”)

 

  • “Adduced” Verb: to offer as example, reason, or proof in discussion or analysis (Webster’s…, 12)

 

  • At the time this letter was written, only a handful of countries acknowledged the United States as an independent nation rather than as a British colony in revolt. Ostensibly the first country to acknowledge the United States’ independence from Great Britain Morocco. However, this recognition was in name only and was not formalized until 1786 when a treaty of peace was signed between the two nations (Dolan). So, the first country to officially acknowledge the United States as an independent nation was France in 1778. Although this treaty was established under the French monarchy, it was maintained after the French Revolution. Additionally, the United States had been recognized by The Netherlands, Spain and Sweden (“Countries”).

 

  • Due to the federal governments inability to tax under the Articles of Confederation, its only recourse to address the national debt was to print money. However, with nothing backing it, the Continental Dollar collapsed, leaving the federal government to borrow money domestically to pay off its foreign debt. This situation was greatly improved after the adoption of the Constitution which allowed the federal government to tax and impose tariffs. The national debt was greatly decreased during Hamilton’s term as Secretary of the Treasury and continued to decrease until the War of 1812 (Phillips).

 

  • This is a direct reference to the “State of Nature”, a concept developed by Thomas Hobbes in his 1651 book Leviathan. Hobbes describes it as the natural condition of mankind, where there is no government or civilization. Humans living in the State of Nature are constantly in conflict with each other in pursuit of power and resources. With no greater power to control them, mankind would exist in a perpetual state of war. Hobbes believed that life in that state is “nasty, brutish and short”. In Leviathan, Hobbes posits that government arises out of human desire to escape the brutality of the State of Nature (Merriam, 154).

 

  • This is an example of the cyclical theory of history and periodic revolution. This concept was popular among the American Revolutionaries, many of whom believed that it was important for a society to go through periods of revolution. Thomas Jefferson wrote that “the tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots & tyrants. it is it’s [sic] natural manure” (Jefferson). The cyclical theory posits that corruption and unjust governments are inevitable and when they arise the people with inevitably revolt. The new government established by the revolutionaries will inherently have flaws, leading to corruption and injustice and eventually, another overthrow of power (Lienesch).

 

  • “Licentious” Adjective: loose and lawless in behavior; esp : lewd, lascivious (Webster’s…, 516)

 

Citations:

  1. BATTS, ROBERT LYNN. “THE NEW CONSTITUTION OF THE UNITED STATES.” American Bar Association Journal, vol. 5, no. 4, 1919, pp. 584–601. JSTOR, JSTOR, jstor.org/stable/25700621.
  2. “Confederation.” Wikipedia, Wikimedia Foundation, 19 June 2018, en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Confederation.
  3. “Countries.” U.S. Department of State, U.S. Department of State, history.state.gov/countries.
  4. Cranston, Maurice. “Locke and Liberty.” The Wilson Quarterly (1976-), vol. 10, no. 5, 1986, pp. 82–93. JSTOR, JSTOR, jstor.org/stable/40257094.
  5. Davis, Jefferson. “The Doctrine of State Rights.” The North American Review, vol. 150, no. 399, 1890, pp. 205–219. JSTOR, JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/25101937.
  6. Dolan, Kerry A. “Why Morocco Matters To The U.S.” Forbes, Forbes Magazine, 21 Nov. 2013, forbes.com/sites/kerryadolan/2013/11/21/why-morocco-matters-to-the-u-s/#635e4fe14f75.
  7. Hamilton, Alexander. “Founders Online: Report Relative to a Provision for the Support of Public Credi …” National Archives and Records Administration, National Archives and Records Administration, founders.archives.gov/documents/Hamilton/01-06-02-0076-0002-0001.
  8. Jaffee, David. “Religion and Culture in North America, 1600–1700.” The Metropolitan Museum of Art, I.e. The Met Museum, Oct. 2004, www.metmuseum.org/toah/hd/recu/hd_recu.htm.
  9. Jefferson, Thomas. “Thomas Jefferson to William Smith.” Library of Congress, loc.gov/exhibits/jefferson/105.html.
  10. Lienesch, Michael. “Historical Theory and Political Reform: Two Perspectives on Confederation Politics.” The Review of Politics, vol. 45, no. 1, 1983, pp. 94–115. JSTOR, JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/1407276.
  11. Merriam, Charles Edward. “Hobbes’s Doctrine of the State of Nature.” Proceedings of the American Political Science Association, vol. 3, 1906, pp. 151–157. JSTOR, JSTOR, jstor.org/stable/3038543.
  12. “Newburgh Address: George Washington to Officers of the Army, March 15, 1783.” George Washington’s Mount Vernon, mountvernon.org/education/primary-sources-2/article/newburgh-address-george-washington-to-officers-of-the-army-march-15-1783/.
  13. Phillips, Matt. “The Long Story of U.S. Debt, From 1790 to 2011, in 1 Little Chart.” The Atlantic, Atlantic Media Company, 14 Nov. 2012, theatlantic.com/business/archive/2012/11/the-long-story-of-us-debt-from-1790-to-2011-in-1-little-chart/265185/.
  14. Reggio, Michael H. “History of the Death Penalty.” PBS, Public Broadcasting Service, pbs.org/wgbh/pages/frontline/shows/execution/readings/history.html.
  15. Samson, Steven Alan, “Articles of Confederation” (1990). Faculty Publications and Presentations. 256.http://digitalcommons.liberty.edu/gov_fac_pubs/256
  16. “Shays’ Rebellion.” History.com, A&E Television Networks, 2009, history.com/topics/shays-rebellion.
  17. “So, What Was the Whiskey Rebellion, Anyway?” George Washington’s Mount Vernon, mountvernon.org/george-washington/biography/washington-stories/what-exactly-was-the-whiskey-rebellion/.
  18. US Department of Veterans Affairs. “America’s Wars.” Office of Public Affairs, May 2017.
  19. Washington, George. “Avalon Project – Washington’s Farewell Address 1796.” Avalon Project – Documents in Law, History and Diplomacy, http://avalon.law.yale.edu/18th_century/washing.asp.
  20. Webster’s School Dictionary. Merriam-Webster Inc.,Publishers, 1986.

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My Writing Process

June 25, 2018 by Grace Griggs

By Grace Griggs

In an ideal world I would be able to ignore the internet entirely, listen to some instrumental music and churn out an essay in one shot. In reality, I am much more distractible than that. Although my struggles with distractions (especially the internet) often lead me to procrastinate, but once I get started I am able to write at a good pace. Deadlines are essential for me. That small sense of urgency helps to reduce my tendency to procrastinate significantly. If I am not given a deadline or have a long-term project with multiple parts, I create deadlines for myself in order to stay on time.

I generally do not do any prewriting, but I do a substantial amount of editing. I find it speeds up my process substantially to write out as much as I can and then trim it down rather than carefully wording each sentence in my first draft. I have used different methods of prewriting before and while I found outlines to be helpful, other methods like mind-mapping were not especially useful for me.

I find it helpful to write at a desk or table with good lighting and a comfortable chair. This puts me in the mindset that I am actually going to get work done. For that reason, I also don’t like to eat while writing because it takes me out of the work mindset. A good bonus is having a window with a nice view nearby. As a lifetime glasses-wearer, I can attest that giving your eyes frequent breaks from screens and close up work is very important. A nice view makes it easy to remember to take those breaks. I find music helpful while reading and writing, but anything with words messes up my train of thought, so I generally listen to instrumental music. I especially like to listen to soundtrack music from movies and video games because they are purposefully designed to sound good but not be distracting.

The exception to my instrumental music rule is this Canadian band. A lot of their music is instrumental, and most of the songs that aren’t are in French anyway. I’ve found their music very good to study and write to.

 

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Hamilton and Responsibly Representing Historical Figures

June 12, 2018 by Grace Griggs

By Grace Griggs

As pointed out in “A Singularity in Blue” Hamilton paints a fairly rosy picture of the Founding Fathers. Hamilton’s purpose is more to reframe the narrative of the American Revolution than it is to show an accurate version of the revolutionaries themselves. To this extent, the events and characters of the show should be taken, like anything “based on a true story”, with a grain of salt. Regardless of this, it is inevitable that a certain segment of the audience will take it for granted that Hamilton is completely historically accurate so it is important to pay attention to how characters are portrayed.

One questionable portrayal is that of General Charles Lee (below), who is introduced in “Stay Alive” with the line “I’m a general! Wheeee!”. Lee is presented as not only “inexperienced and ruinous”, but also as childish. Given Lee went on to slander Washington and damage the revolutionary cause, it makes sense that a story told from Hamilton’s perspective would view Lee this way. However, prior to the Battle of Monmouth fiasco, the historical Lee was a successful and well respected general. He was in the running for Washington’s position as Commander in Chief, but was turned down, in part because he wished to be compensated for English property he gave up when he joined rebellion, whereas Washington would work for free. This is clearly not the General Lee we see in Hamilton and it is not made clear whether the character is supposed to be the historical Lee or Lee as seen by Hamilton.

In comparison, the bias of the narrative is made explicit in “Say No to This” where the story is being told solely from Hamilton’s perspective. All of Maria Reynolds’ lines are preceded with an attributive from Hamilton like “she said”. The historical record of the events between Alexander and Maria is based entirely on Hamilton’s version of the events, where he painted Maria as a seductive caricature in order to absolve himself of guilt. It is clear that this is not supposed to represent Maria herself, but the way history views her through the lens of Hamilton’s writing.

While both of these depictions could be considered uncharitable at best, Maria’s characterization never strays into questionable territory because it is explicitly a biased caricature of the actual Maria Reynolds. Lee, on the other hand, is portrayed as a buffoon, without that same explicit purpose. It would be incredibly easy for an audience member to come away viewing the historical Lee as the caricature presented in the show. So, do the creators of a work like Hamilton have a responsibility to accurately and charitably represent historical figures? Are the legacies of the long dead worth protecting at the expense of artistic liberties? For figures like Lee, who is relatively obscure and became disgraced before his death, does it matter if his reputation is further tarnished 200 years later? I can’t answer these questions, but it seems important that they get asked.

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Progress on Historical Annotation Project

June 5, 2018 by Grace Griggs

By Grace Griggs

The document I chose to annotate is an excerpt from “Circular Letter to the States” which was written by George Washington in June of 1783. It was written as he was stepping down as a military leader. The letter was sent to the executives of each state and was also published in newspapers throughout the country so that the populace could read it as well.

 

Washington’s Circular to the States as published in newspapers all across the states.

 

I was initially drawn to this document because it so closely parallels Washington’s farewell address. Just like Washington gave his advice for the success of the nation as he stepped down from the presidency, he also wrote out his advice to the nation as he stepped down from command of the Continental Army. I thought it would be interesting to see how his advice was followed or not followed during the next few years.

The most important research for this document is figuring out in what ways Washington’s suggestions were implemented throughout his presidency and, in some cases, his reasons behind those choices. I’ve been approaching this by searching “George Washington” and whatever general issue each of his points pertains to. For instance, his first advice is on the importance of uniting the states under a federal head. So I started my search by looking into Washington’s relation to federalism and the federalists.

My main challenge thus far has been trying to interpret Washington’s language. While it’s not impossible to understand, it does take some time to work out the exact meaning of what he is saying. Similarly, it is not always obvious which parts warrant an annotation. Some sentences are essentially nice-sounding filler with no clear reference that needs to be explained or expanded on. And additional problem I’ve been having is finding peer-reviewed sources. Hopefully the visit from a GT librarian will help me figure that out.

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Burr as a Foil to Hamilton

May 29, 2018 by Grace Griggs

by Grace Griggs

 

In Hamilton Aaron Burr is written as a foil to Hamilton. In literary terms, a foil is a character whose differences with another character are used to highlight that character’s qualities. In this case, Burr’s similarities and differences with Hamilton are used to highlight Hamilton’s strong ambition and drive and how those affect his path in life.

Hamilton and Burr’s defining life experiences are almost identical. Both were orphaned at a young age, both graduate early from the same college, both fight under Washington and both pursue law after the war and become politicians. Despite these similarities, the two men’s attitudes and goals in life are at odds. This is immediately presented in the pair’s individual ‘mission statement’ songs, “My Shot” for Hamilton and “Wait For It” for Burr. Hamilton’s ultimate goal is to rise above his humble beginnings and build a legacy for himself. His strategy for this is to jump on any and every opportunity available to him and claw his way up from the bottom. In contrast, Burr’s plan is to keep all of his options open and wait until the perfect opportunity for him to strike. These different approaches define their actions throughout Act 1.

While Washington ignores Burr, he actively recruits Hamilton as his secretary based on Hamilton’s impulsive decision to steal cannons from the British army (“Right Hand Man”). The only time Hamilton’s impulsiveness hurts him is when he is sent home after he goes against Washington’s orders (“Meet Me Inside”). Apart from that, he is given is own command during the war (“Guns and Ships”), is chosen to represent New York at the Constitutional Convention and is chosen to be the Secretary of the Treasury (“Non-Stop”). At this point it is apparent that Hamilton’s relentless drive and impulsiveness have paid off for him, whereas Burr’s hesitation and unwillingness to pick a side have held him back.

 

It is clear that Hamilton’s approach has lead to his success both in his work and in war, but it has come at the cost of his personal life. While Burr is awed at Hamilton’s relentless work ethic, his wife Eliza begs to be involved in his life, asking for “a fraction of [his] time” (“Non-Stop”). Burr on the other hand, gives top priority to his loved ones. In “Wait For It” Burr says that Theodosia’s husband, a British officer fighting in Georgia, “can keep all of Georgia, Theodosia she’s mine”. To Burr, even the new nation he is fighting for is less important than having the woman he loves in his life.

Hamilton’s success at the expense of his personal life is countered by Burr’s relative lack of success and his happy family life. Both of these are directly due to the two’s differing goals and approaches to life. Burr and Hamilton are two side of the same coin, opposite results with the same starting conditions. Burr is still waiting for his moment and it is likely that his success will lead to Hamilton’s downfall.

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Excerpt From Washington’s Circular to the States

May 25, 2018 by Grace Griggs

by Grace Griggs

Source: http://www.mountvernon.org/education/primary-sources-2/article/circular-to-the-states-george-washington-to-the-states-june-8-1783/

There are four things, which I humbly conceive, are essential to the well being, I may even venture to say, to the existence of the United States as an Independent Power:

1st. An indissoluble Union of the States under one Federal Head.

2dly. A Sacred regard to Public Justice.

3dly. The adoption of a proper Peace Establishment, and

4thly. The prevalence of that pacific and friendly Disposition, among the People of the United States, which will induce them to forget their local prejudices and policies, to make those mutual concessions which are requisite to the general prosperity, and in some instances, to sacrifice their individual advantages to the interest of the Community.

These are the Pillars on which the glorious Fabrick of our Independency and National Character must be supported; Liberty is the Basis, and whoever would dare to sap the foundation, or overturn the Structure, under whatever specious pretexts he may attempt it, will merit the bitterest execration, and the severest punishment which can be inflicted by his injured Country.

On the three first Articles I will make a few observations, leaving the last to the good sense and serious consideration of those immediately concerned.

Under the first head, altho’ it may not be necessary or proper for me in this place to enter into a particular disquisition of the principles of the Union, and to take up the great question which has been frequently agitated, whether it be expedient and requisite for the States to delegate a larger proportion of Power to Congress, or not, Yet it will be a part of my duty, and that of every true Patriot, to assert without reserve, and to insist upon the following positions, That unless the States will suffer Congress to exercise those prerogatives, they are undoubtedly invested with by the Constitution, every thing must very rapidly tend to Anarchy and confusion, That it is indispensable to the happiness of the individual States, that there should be lodged somewhere, a Supreme Power to regulate and govern the general concerns of the Confederated Republic, without which the Union cannot be of long duration. That there must be a faithfull and pointed compliance on the part of every State, with the late proposals and demands of Congress, or the most fatal consequences will ensue, That whatever measures have a tendency to dissolve the Union, or contribute to violate or lessen the Sovereign Authority, ought to be considered as hostile to the Liberty and Independency of America, and the Authors of them treated accordingly, and lastly, that unless we can be enabled by the concurrence of the States, to participate of the fruits of the Revolution, and enjoy the essential benefits of Civil Society, under a form of Government so free and uncorrupted, so happily guarded against the danger of oppression, as has been devised and adopted by the Articles of Confederation, it will be a subject of regret, that so much blood and treasure have been lavished for no purpose, that so many sufferings have been encountered without a compensation, and that so many sacrifices have been made in vain. Many other considerations might here be adduced to prove, that without an entire conformity to the Spirit of the Union, we cannot exist as an Independent Power; it will be sufficient for my purpose to mention but one or two which seem to me of the greatest importance. It is only in our united Character as an Empire, that our Independence is acknowledged, that our power can be regarded, or our Credit supported among Foreign Nations. The Treaties of the European Powers with the United States of America, will have no validity on a dissolution of the Union. We shall be left nearly in a state of Nature, or we may find by our own unhappy experience, that there is a natural and necessary progression, from the extreme of anarchy to the extreme of Tyranny; and that arbitrary power is most easily established on the ruins of Liberty abused to licentiousness.

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Introduction: Grace Griggs

May 19, 2018 by Grace Griggs

Hi guys! I’m Grace Griggs.

I’m a Mechanical Engineering major. I’m planning to graduate in 2021, but I would really like to do a co-op while at Tech, which might push that back a bit. I’m in the online section of the course so that I can spend my Summer at home in New Hampshire. Outside of class I’m doing construction and repair work at a local horse farm, which I’m really enjoying. My current project is building lean-to shelters for the horses and my next project is to repaint the entire farmhouse.

English is not always my favorite subject, but interesting course material can more than make up for that. My favorite English class I have ever taken was a combination English/Modern History class I took during my senior year of high school. This is my first college level English class so I’m not entirely sure what to expect. I definitely didn’t expect that I’d get class credit for tweeting. I am hoping to improve my verbal communication skills during this semester, as that is the area I struggle the most with.

I’ve heard of Hamilton before, but I had been avoiding listening to it because I thought I might see it one day and I wanted to avoid spoilers. This is great because I’m coming at the show without any previous baggage. I did theater tech and set construction all throughout high school and worked on several musicals, so you might think that I am a big fan of musical theater, but I’m actually not. When I watch a play I mainly focus on the technical aspects like the lighting and set design because those are the parts I find the most interesting. I’ll watch musicals, but I don’t really care for them outside of the tech. I am excited because this class will push me outside of my comfort zone by focusing on the elements of a show that I tend to pay less attention to.

 

Here are a couple of the animals from the farm I work at: Honey Badger (top) and Figaroo (bottom).

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