By: Karl Risley
In my proposal, I said I would pull lyrics from countless songs from Hamilton the play, envisioning more of a remix that was composed of Lin Manuel’s lyrics. I ended up creating most of the lines on my own. I did end up using lyrics from “Hamilton” and “Wait For It”, and “the World Was Wide Enough”. My extensive knowledge of the duel correspondences, from the Historical Annotation project, allowed me to immediately dive into writing the lyrics without researching.
Emily Moseley was my peer review partner. She was only able to get a glimpse of the guitar playing and read the lyrics. She told me that I need to make sure I understood the tempo of the song, and suggested that I add the word “the” into the line “aim for sky”, which was a great suggestion that I implemented. I also added a very brief introduction before the song that provides background to the song. Her edits were helpful because they were focused on improving how a listener would perceive and understand the song. Because she was a listener, she knew exactly what the song needed to take it to the next level. She caught things, I the producer/writer, couldn’t catch.
This process was very different for me because it required me to rely on things that were out of my control. Mainly, the idea of having a women sing the vocals was great, but proved difficult to actually pull off. I asked a friend of mine that I knew could sing a little. She was out of town until July 8th, and due to her busy schedule, could only meet me once. I think proposing a video was ambitious. I even planned on her wearing a shirt that I knew she had that said, “Dangerous Woman.” She forgot it. There was no way a video could have been made while we were recording. While one of us was doing well, the other would mess up. She was reading the lyrics from her phone, while I was focused on playing guitar. The video would not have seen either of our faces. It also took forever to record, but was honestly a very fun process. We never were able to get through the whole song in one cut, so I had to edit good pieces of each take together, which also tested my editing skills that I did not have, nor was I really planning on using extensively. As soon as I knew I wanted to make this song, I began to learn the guitar for it. With my guitar skill level, it was very difficult, I could barely play the sequence for thirty seconds because my hand would cramp and get tired from the power chords. I was very impressed with how much that improved. When the recording day came,I didn’t started feeling the fatigue until an hour in.