Changes made:

• I agree that my first section on the project proposal was not clear on whether the issue was revolving around schools or students. I changed the wording to hopefully make it clear the problem I am exposing is with the schools
• Took out “unbiased education” and replaced it with “a complete education, not one that changes the science based on your religion.”
• I did not narrow my audience outside of voters but I elaborated to back it up more. Giving the reason why voting really is the issue and why this should be relevant to all voters
• Took out some of the harsher language in “the film will mean nothing to them”
• Added more scholarly articles and the screenplay to the bibliography