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The Seduction of Beauty

April 13, 2023 by syahn3

Kirti Gourisankar

To Richard, beauty is not the autumnal colors of the trees, but rather their rage and vengeance as they succumb to the changing of seasons. As he exclaims over the stunning “schizophrenia” of the landscape, Richard embarks on a reflection of his lessons with Julian. He ponders over the idea of beauty and the souls of the Greek and is both invigorated and moved by Julian’s teachings. Through the use of contrasting syntax and impactful diction, this selected passage formally introduces a central motif of the story: “Beauty is terror” helping readers to understand the dangers of the romanticism the character’s engage in. 

The passage begins with a winding sentence that carries readers to its middle (Tartt 42). The punctuation here is a menagerie of commas and semicolons dispersed through the narrator’s fantastical observations. The lack of any full stops creates an effect so that each idea seemingly morphs into the next. This reflects the dreamlike trance the narrator is in while also setting the stage for the philosophical declarations the narrator is about to launch into. The abundance and volume of his thoughts show readers that the narrator is in a very inspired and contemplative state- the perfect mood to introduce an important theme.

A stark contrast is created then, as the narrator continues on to declare, “Beauty is terror. Whatever we call beautiful, we quiver before it” (Tartt 42). The short, simple sentence structure seems abrupt after the rambling, trailing organization of the previous sentence. Such contrast clues readers into the importance of the message. The simple, no frills statement seems innate and honest; it reveals some essential truth about humanity. Additionally, the writing, being in italics, emphasizes the importance of its words, setting them apart from the rest of the narrator’s musings. As such, they are no longer merely his thoughts, but perhaps something more universally significant. The point of view becomes ambiguous. Either way, it hints to readers that the statement is something that will be relevant throughout the book- a central theme to the story. The repetition of the statement “Beauty is terror” later in the passage reinforces this idea. (Tartt 42). Describing beauty in such a specific, repeated way establishes a strong link between the search and focus on things of beauty and an imminent terror and ruin that follows. Each repetition of the idea sounds as a warning and reminder for readers of the dangers of romanticism.

The narrator’s declaration is foreshadowed by some of the more peculiar, though fully intentioned, wording in the first half of his monologue. The narrator describes himself as “achingly conscious” and observes his surroundings as a “deep deep painful blue” (Tartt 42). This is an important word choice as it shows that beauty the narrator describes can only be observed painfully; it’s something almost terrific. There is something sad and visceral about witnessing the beauty around him. These descriptions create a melancholic and alarming mood which suggests to readers that Richard’s romanticism can only bring him pain. Furthermore, the act of romanticism is one rooted in pain and suffering- a comorbid affliction.

The diction again plays an integral role in the second half of the passage. With wording including: “lose control”, “enraged”, and “insanity”, the narrator references the terrorful craze that all humans yearn to succumb to (Tartt 42). Synonymous with our desire for beauty, our desire for terror and madness is intrinsic to our nature- the two are one in the same. In this way, the diction develops the main idea of the passage which argues that beauty is terror, warning readers that a pursuit of beauty through romanticism is volatile and dangerous. Furthermore, such romanticism clouds our senses, and blinds us to the terror it brings. When we focus solely on beauty, we limit our perspective, fatally ignoring the other aspects of our humanity which make us whole.

Another interesting choice in wording, was the reference to van Gogh in the proceeding line (Tartt 42). The allusion to van Gogh subtly pieces together the theme of beauty being terror. His life, particularly the end of it, was hallmarked by his mental illness and internal anguish, which coincided with his life as an artist. Beauty was derived from his struggle and terror; the former could never exist without the latter. Just like Richard’s flawed romanticism, a focus on beauty and art fails to account for the lives and stories that accompany them. We lose the essence of what makes us human when we only regard such small, curated glimpses of our lives.

Throughout the second half of the passage, the narrator makes repeated reference to fire, one of the four classic elements of the ancient Greek (Tartt 42). This choice in diction creates a mood of intensity- a symbolic warning that something of such divine beauty is also a force of destruction. There is a sense of inevitability and inertia to this truth- they way an object burns with certain urgency. Ignoring the burn of the fire for the brightness of its blaze is a quick path to ruin. Similarly, our focus on beauty fragments our perspective, and blinds us to any perception of truth.

The narrator concludes the passage with one last haunting revelation, “We want to be devoured by it, to hide ourselves in that fire which refines us” (Tartt 42). The word devoured is a strong choice of diction to show how fundamental and significant our desire for beauty is, perhaps to a fault. It has a morbid finality to it, creating a feeling of unease- foreshadowing the eventual demise of the book’s protagonists as they lose themselves in their unwavering romanticism. Additionally, the use of the word “refine” is quite unusual. The idea of fire refining rather than destroying is an important distinction because it reveals the flawed perspective of the narrator. His belief that a pursuit of beauty is an essential step towards self-actualization, prevents him from accepting and coping with the less-than beautiful parts of his life. Equating beauty to happiness can only leave someone wanting. Similarly, while romanticism gives us a lens in which to contextualize our lives, it establishes a harmful mindset that relies on the filtering of our experiences, holding us back from living real, full lives.

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One Note Away from a Symphony

April 11, 2023 by lchen683

Dragos Lup

Richard’s passage describing Charles playing the piano first stuck out to me because it feels almost alien in the context of the passage. It begins with an incredibly descriptive section of chapter two in which Richard became enamored by his environment. The passage itself struggles to maintain its ideas, and it quickly jumps between different tones of writing. This passage is written in a way that describes Richard’s separation from the group and the feelings that someone outside of dark academia may have about the subject.

The first sentence is a big part of what makes this passage so interesting: it shows us all of Richard’s feelings about Charles, but also Charles’ feelings. The phrases “played with relish” and “smiling at his work” let the reader know that Charles is enamored by his work to the point where even Richard can notice it (Tartt 79). Rather than saying he was smiling, it is said that he smiled at his work as if he could smile at a sound. In a similar sense, it is said that he played with relish rather than played well to show that the focus of this passage isn’t the music; it’s how the music makes the characters feel. Richard describes the music as a “tricky syncopation,” almost as if listening to it was confusing, but it melded together in a symphony (Tartt 79). This sentence reminds the readers how Richard feels about the group and that, despite his loneliness, he still desperately looks up to the group. So much so that Richard even describes himself listening to it as almost awkward, as if he isn’t good enough to be in the presence of such a scene. This feeling is something fans of dark academia might relate to, wanting to join in on a group but feeling separated because of class.

In the following sentences, the passage goes from describing an extremely emotional moment in an amazingly intricate way to a very plain situation. The sentences describe Camilla sitting beside Charles and smiling at Richard, followed by Richard smiling back. These two sentences are so incredibly plain compared to the intricate detail of the first sentence: it is jarring that they’re in the same passage. These sentences feel out of place in the passage, just like how the passage feels out of place in the chapter. The change in writing style reflects Richard’s state of mind. While Charles’ music needed all that detail to show its importance, this moment with Camilla was already important. This separation between the very “dark academia-esque” playing of the piano, the overall environment, and the moment with Camilla amplify these feelings of isolation. Richard is a man from a broken home with little to no money to speak of, and while he strives for the picturesque, now that he’s there, he’s almost embarrassed to be included. Dark Academia can feel like a very closed-off community that is dominated by rich people, and Richard can be related to it in this way.

The writing style returns to its original state, and Camilla’s interjection is further amplified by the final sentence. Richard describes the ceiling as giving off a “ghostly echo” (Tartt 79). You can almost see him struggle to escape his situation by focusing on other parts of the room, forgetting that he’s right in the middle. Despite his immense desire to feel included, Richard is afraid to be. He describes the situation as having “desperate hilarity” and having “the quality of a memory” (Tartt 79). These words describe Richard’s thoughts in real time. He struggles with allowing himself to live in the moment and tries to return to viewing the situation as separate from himself. Finally, he says, “memories of things I’ve never known,” which describes the difficulty he finds himself in. He views his environment as something he would love to have but fears that he is not included: almost synonymous with someone wanting to take part in dark academia.

This passage is written interestingly to describe Richard’s situation and his emotional state. It helps to give us context for future decisions Richard makes when he puts his image above his safety because he believes he’s barely a part of the group in the first place. These feelings are almost echoing modern-day fans of dark academia, who might look at the community and believe that they’re not included. Richard views his position in the group as a dream he struggles to keep living, and he’s afraid that even the smallest mistake will wake him up.

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Beauty and Terror

April 11, 2023 by lchen683

Trent Harris

“It was like a painting too vivid to be real- every pebble, every blade of grass sharply defined, the sky so blue it hurt me to look at it. Camilla was limp in Henry’s arms, her head thrown back like a dead girl’s, and the curve of her throat beautiful and lifeless.”

At the end of Chapter 2, Donna Tartt makes use of powerful descriptive imagery and symbolism to depict this vivid scene of Henry carrying a bleeding Camilla out of the water, which alludes to the seemingly recurring theme of terrifying beauty which can be seen in Tartt’s descriptions of settings and atmospheres throughout the novel thus far. This scene can also serve as a gateway to the discussion that there is perhaps something more terrifying beneath the beauty of these tastefully dressed and elitist characters Richard associates himself with.

Tartt begins the paragraph with the very striking simile, “It was like a painting too vivid to be real,” which evokes powerful imagery in the readers’ mind immediately (Tartt 60). Paintings are associated with a characteristic of displaying this incomparable beauty that is exclusive through art. Describing the scene as a painting too vivid for reality, gives this quality to the scene that helps the reader put a hyper realistic, surreal image in their mind. Additionally, Tartt proceeds to quickly list all the small details that form this vivid painting with no punctuation to slow the pace of the writing, which helps to put every detail into place in the readers’ mind and allow the painted visual to come to life. The word “hurt,”, stood out because it helped portray this vivid afternoon sky which is radiating light that outlines Henry and Camilla (Tartt 60). The idea of the sky being so bright it hurts is a very niche but precise description of a midsummer sky that the majority of readers will be able to comprehend and relate to. Thus, the author uses “hurt” to take the reader back to a summer day and describes the scene with a realistic, personal, and tangible quality.

Furthermore, I thought the usage of “the curve of her throat beautiful and lifeless” was a powerful phrase to end the scene (Tartt 60). I felt the word lifeless was a smart and evocative word choice because the image the author is painting is this instantaneous moment in time where the colors are vivid, yet all are still and “lifeless,” which gives this unusually tranquil quality to the image presented. Another thing I noticed is the contrast and irony of using the words “beautiful and lifeless” as a pair. Typically, dead, or lifeless things have lost their beauty and are terrifying; however, in this scenario the authors use lifeless to complement and even emphasize the beauty of Camilla in the scene.

This contrast of beauty and terror in the scene reminds the reader of Julian lecturing earlier in the book about how “bloody, terrible things are sometimes the most beautiful” and “Beauty is terror. Whatever we call beautiful, we quiver before it” (Tartt 26). This lecture has a lot of foreshadowing in the book and will be a recurring theme and idea. Already within the first few chapters, the reader can pick up on symbolism revolving around this idea of terrifying beauty, and it is seen in the settings Tartt describes in great detail: from the eerily creepy, desolate, yet still beautiful, halls of the campus to the ever so terrifying and depressing snowy landscape where Richard situates himself over the winter in Chapter 3. We also see this concept directly expressed in the paragraph excerpt from the end of Chapter 2. On a deeper level, this idea can even be reflected in the characters of the book, who seem to be portrayed as objectively beautiful, well put together, elegantly dressed, and all carrying themselves with this sophisticated manner. However, we are slowly learning that there is more to them, and they are very secretive, and what we do not know terrifies us the most. Therefore, it is quite possible that these characters are hiding something terrifying beneath the surface of their beauty and looks. The excerpt at the end of Chapter 2 uses symbolism that hints towards this theme that Julian introduces the reader to.

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