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English 1102: Hamilton and Writing

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June 5, 2018 by Ye Jun Kim

above: Photo of the letters Alexander Hamilton wrote to Elizabeth Schuyler Hamilton

Photo source: https://www.gilderlehrman.org/content/hamilton%E2%80%99s-love-letter-day-december-14

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By: Ye Jun Kim

For my historical document, I chose the letters Alexander Hamilton wrote to Elizabeth Hamilton in 1781. These letters were published on the National Archives webpage.

Personally, I am not a huge fan of learning history. With that being said, I read the documents and tried to pick one that I found most interesting, which at first was very hard because all of them are basically talking about history of the American Revolution. However, I came across the letters Alexander Hamilton wrote to Elizabeth Schuyler Hamilton, and thought that I could work with this. These letters not only has historical facts, but they also have words of affirmation and longing towards Elizabeth Hamilton. I thought that this would be a nice addition to analyze along with the historical evidences.

I found it very interesting that Hamilton reveals his ardent and energetic personality even through the letters. However, the audience and reason would be completely different from when he is expressing his support for the American Revolution. Something I found that was different from what I have observed about him through the musical was his poetic and delicate side. In the middle of the letters, Hamilton seems to speak to Elizabeth, or “Betsy”, as if handling a very fragile puppy.

WIth this interesting point, I thought that it would be interesting to analyze literary devices used and connect that to the time period along with the historical facts regarding the Revolution. One challenge that I found from here is that it is really hard to find primary or secondary documents that explain the way people wrote the way they did. To overcome this obstacle, I might just find other documents around similar time periods and compare them to the letters that I chose.

To understand the documents, I think that understanding the timeline and the people involved are very important. In order to do so, I have found a timeline laid out according to the month and the year of the Revolution from the start to the finish. And while reading those timelines and the letter side by side, I would look up the people involved in the corresponding time periods and look to see if they have any primary or secondary documents associated with them.

As I go on in the research I personally think that I have chosen a rather difficult document to analyze, but I believe that this allowed me to look beyond just the Revolutionary war and just analyze the time period as a whole.

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Addressing Washington’s Farewell Address

June 4, 2018 by Keval Bollavaram

By: Keval Bollavaram

For my Historical Annotation Project, I chose George Washington’s Farewell Address. George Washington originally wrote his farewell along with James Madison at the end of his first term. However, after serving a second term he revised his message due to disputes between Thomas Jefferson and Alexander Hamilton. Moreover, this document was first published in the American Daily Advertiser.

I remember learning about the historical importance of George Washington’s Farewell Address in my high school history class. This document represents the hopes of George Washington for the country after experiencing the disagreements between members of his own cabinet. I chose this document because it shows how many of Washington’s fears have come to fruition. Specially, Washington warns against powerful and established political parties that would divide the young nation and lead to either division or invasion.

Researching George Washington has become intertwined with researching the Revolutionary War and conflicts between the Founding Fathers. For example, Washington references mistakes he made during the war and hopes that the people of the United States will forgive him. Here he is referencing his failures as commander and chief as well as he defeats during the Revolutionary war such as his tactical loss and retreat from New York.

In order to connect his ideas through my annotations, some of my beginning research work focuses on the broader history of the time period. Unfortunately, it has been difficult to isolate necessary information from miscellaneous facts. This has caused some of annotations to be long winded and less focused on the text. To overcome these issues, I hope to look over my existing annotations and summarize them. Moving forward, I will focus on specific facts/events that are directly related to George Washington and Alexander Hamilton.

One cool thing that I stumbled upon while conducting my research was this video from Senator Tim Kaine where he explains the importance of George Washington’s Farewell Address and describes how it is recited each year.

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Blog Entry 2

June 4, 2018 by Karl Risley

By: Karl Risley

I chose to historically annotate a letter Hamilton wrote to Burr on June 20th, 1804. It is the first letter written by Hamilton to Burr concerning the issue that led to their duel, a response to Burr’s initial letter sent on June 18th, 1804. The letter is the second letter found on this page (https://en.wikisource.org/wiki/Hamilton%E2%80%93Burr_duel_correspondences). It was delivered to Burr through Hamilton’s second, Pendleton. I was drawn to the document because when I first looked at it I didn’t understand the contents at all. It was so confusing that I moved on to find another source. After nothing caught my eye, I returned to this letter out of curiosity. I started  getting background on the characters involved. Thirty minutes later I realized I began understanding the letter, and ultimately that I was doing exactly what this project entailed, researching to unveil meaning. I was attracted to this letter for its research potential, and also because the subject concerns Hamilton’s and Burr’s duel, an extremely important moment, one the musical builds too throughout its songs.

This letter requires multiple “types” of research to be done properly. The historical context of different words shed light on the tone and intent of the diction chosen by Hamilton. For example I found that the meaning of the word gentlemen was not simply a polite term like it is used today, it held more prestige. The common format, salutations, and greetings of the time period also reveal the tone of Hamilton’s words. Is he writing to a close friend, an enemy, colleague? All of this can be revealed by how he adheres to the standard format of letters of his time. Basic research of characters is also necessary for understanding. Researching more background on Burr and Hamilton, and gaining information on others involved all lead to a more coherent analysis. Understanding Hamilton more allows me to understand his words better, through knowing his writing style, word choices, and background. Simple definitions of uncommon words is also helpful. I approached this research first by identifying different aspects of the letter I deemed worthy of research, such as learning the 19th century meaning of “gentlemen”. I also used the sources listed at the bottom of the wikipedia pages that surfaced through my searches to find more reputable sources.

I have found that the more research I do, the more research and information it leads too. It is similar to an iceberg, revealing more and more ice as you get deeper.

A very helpful book I have found that might benefit a lot of people, as it focuses on Hamilton, is found here: https://books.google.com/books?id=A1U4AQAAMAAJ&pg=PA231&lpg=PA231&dq=The+World%27s+History+and+Its+Makers:+American+statesman&source=bl&ots=_QwXwZiy01&sig=Z_w0n13MKwTjoBAX12zjbfzHlO0&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiH2vXri7vbAhUJXa0KHWbHCMYQ6AEIODAD#v=onepage&q=The%20World’s%20History%20and%20Its%20Makers%3A%20American%20statesman&f=false.

I have gotten lost in research several times because it is very easy to go off on tangents. If I had a recommendation for the class it would be to identify specific goals of each search you perform for your research. Stick to these goals. Unless you think a tangent is actually relevant you may be wasting your time.

 

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Entry 2: Research is Rough

June 4, 2018 by Carol Rojas Ramirez

By: Carol Rojas Ramirez

Hey there! If you haven’t checked out my Transcription entry, you totally should. It’s on the Reynolds Pamphlet, which is the historical document that I will be using for my annotation project. This Pamphlet was written by our very own Alexander Hamilton when his lover’s husband (James Reynolds) threatened his political career by falsely accusing him of embezzling funds (I know… it’s kind of crazy).

Of course, since Hamilton had beef with literally everyone, the Pamphlet caught many peoples’ attention and it had a lasting impact on his career.  

I was really interested by the document primarily because of the amount of drama that has surrounded it for years. Now that I’ve started doing research on the background, I have found so many more conspiracy theories and stories that explain this bizarre time in Hamilton’s life. More importantly, I have found that a lot of the stuff surrounding the Pamphlet isn’t just cheap gossip but a window into the political and socioeconomic climate of the time. It has been interesting and rather entertaining learning about the blackmail plot and questioning Maria’s involvement in the whole scheme but when you really start reading the document, you start to wonder who James Reynolds was and if he considered Hamilton as an enemy (politically, not just because he was sleeping with his wife). This got me deeper into the political factions of the time as well as Hamilton’s time as the Treasury Secretary. Unfortunately, it has been rather difficult to find primary sources that provide some insight into these topics. There are certainly many articles out there that give you a run-down on the affair and what they think really happened between the three people but there are not documents in which Hamilton describes his time as the Treasury Secretary. Yes, there are many finance and economics journals that describe Hamilton’s ideas and how they have shaped the nation, but they don’t provide specific detail as to how this affected his personal life. Getting any insight into James Reynolds was even worse. This is the stuff that I found on Google Scholar:  

 

Moving forward, I am going to try to do some more reading of Chernow’s Alexander Hamilton as he provides good summaries of the occurrences in during this time in Hamilton’s life. I also think that it will be a good jumping off point for my research. I think that if I can read summaries and then try to get more information on a specific topic, like the Federalists and the Anti-Federalist factions, I’ll be able to piece the different details together to understand the Reynolds Pamphlet a bit better.  

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Blog Entry 1: Framing History in a Modern Light

June 4, 2018 by Noah Hammond

by Noah Hammond

In the musical “Hamilton” Miranda takes many creative liberties with the accuracy of the historical events that happen in the events of the musical. The songs that are performed throughout the play are hip-hop or rap songs that would usually have no connection to Alexander Hamilton and his life. Miranda chose to use the life of Alexander Hamilton to represent the life of someone coming to America, starting from the bottom, and trying to make their way in the world. Hamilton had to prove himself with only his wits and ambition. A lot of minorities in America have a similar experience where they have to rely on only themselves since they won’t get any extra or free help from the world.

 

 

The creative liberties in the musical also highlight how history can be applied to modern times. If we look at Hamilton, we see that he is incredibly intelligent and ambitious, but he has to work much harder since he came to America on a ship. Today we have issues with racism and hatred for people unlike ourselves. If we look at the story of Alexander Hamilton, we can see some parallels to our own modern time. I believe that this was what Miranda was going for when he decided to make a musical about Alexander Hamilton that included creative liberties with history and modern music genres.

Another big reason that he decided to take some creative liberties was that it makes the musical more interesting to watch. Maybe it’s just me, but I feel like the musical would be a whole lot more boring if it were perfectly historically accurate.

 

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Blog Entry 2 By: Avery Showell

June 4, 2018 by Avery Showell

Hamilton–Burr duel correspondences

By: Avery Showell

The historical annotation project has been a process and ongoing process. There have been areas where you learn new things about research in general. Most evidently when using different resources to gather information you will be introduced to new material and techniques. Finding new sources and reliable authors have upsides and down sides. One upside being there are many sources and writers with the credentials to be considered reliable, but there is also a downside to where most sources you find will not be as useful as you may think or even be helpful at all.

For my research I chose the historical document I used the Hamilton-Burr Correspondences. These letters are written and conversed by Alexander Hamilton and Aaron Burr. This document was published in 1804 and you can find it many places on the internet. When approaching the research to this topic I try to stay as open minded as I can and accept the historical legacy that I am researching. The document seemed like the most intriguing to me to have such a direct document to read. Letters of the past are more like the text messages of today and when you think of it like that and relate it to your present day life you find appreciation for historical context. The conversations through letters are the most important in whole. Simply because it is documented and can be examined for deeper meaning.

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To understand the document you need research that includes insight from other peer sources and experts. There are many experts that have diagnosed the document before and they offer many insights to the text broken down. There are challenges with anything, so the challenges that have arose with this assignment is mostly time management and and structure. A simple solution that I have found to this problem is time management schedules for each class and assignments. So then I can see what I need to do and know how much work I have to complete on each assignment.

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Blog Entry 1 : The Rhythm of Hip Hop

June 4, 2018 by Avery Showell

 

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By: Avery Showell

Hamilton is a musical inspired by the one of the founding fathers, Alexander Hamilton. The musical brings a sense of comfort and being accepted to the genre. For one, I never watch musicals or if I have watched one it was mandatory in grade school. The subject of this historical context could come off very uneasy and simply boring to many. This is why Lin-Manuel Miranda and his unorthodox, but traditional in certain neighborhoods, ways of teaching and entertaining are valuable. The art of hip hop comes in a form to where many people can vibe to it different types of ways. Lin-Manuel Miranda offer lines of great rhymes and bars that you would see with any other rapper. He utilizes the use of a hook to catch the flow of the beat and engage the audience in the same way a rapper would when releasing songs on a mix-tape or album. So the comfort of feeling like history and and hip hop come together and not feel like a drag is an outstanding effort by Lin-Manuel Miranda, the producers, and staff that helped portray Alexander Hamilton.

Hamilton review Broadway

The Musical offers fun and excitement to the audience and its readers which is an advantage to the production of the show. When you really sit down and listen to the different rhyme schemes and alliterations that are used in the process of  Hamilton you start to appreciate the way it purposely connected to the roots of hip hip. There are times where you can even figure the sound is more “Eminem” like and you try to compare in your mind how similar the wordplay is using different vocabulary. Hamilton opens a window between musical theater and the body it brings and the attention of hip hop/rap communities while educating on the historical America.

 

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Hamilton and Burr Duel correspondence

June 4, 2018 by Takudzwa Chimedza

For my annotation project, I chose the Hamilton and Burr Duel correspondence document. The document I chose consisted of letters sent back and forth from Hamilton and Burr. These letters would then lead to the duel between the two that would result in the death of Hamilton. When looking at the document choices, I automatically drawn to this one because it was basically giving me the steps that would lead to the climax of the whole story. As far as research goes, I have started looking for insight just yet. I wanted to take time and read over the letters a couple of times to make sure I knew exactly what was going on and how each of the two were feeling toward each other. I wanted to establish my own personal annotation before I went to get information from another source. My biggest obstacle is trying to accurately paraphrase what the two were saying to each other. If it was just a regular document with one person expressing their feelings, then it would have been easier for me to comprehend. But since it is two people that are writing back and forth to each other, some of the things they say to each other could have a deeper meaning than what is perceived and that would lead to me displaying false information to the people reading my annotations. To help with this obstacle, I am going to try and look at the document as if I were either Hamilton or Burr. This would help me see things from their perspective and it could help with some of the lines that are hard to annotate. Other than that everything else is going smooth with the project, it should be interesting trying to annotate what was essentially a beef with Hamilton and Burr.

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Blog Entry 2: Hamilton, America, and Love from 1781 to 1804

June 4, 2018 by Adair Garrett

By: Adair Garrett

I chose the letters of correspondence between Eliza and Alexander Hamilton.  These letters were published on “Founders Online”, which is an official website of the United States government administered by the National Archives and Records Administration.  I chose these documents because I was very interested in the love story between Hamilton and Eliza, especially since their relationship lasted through many trials and tribulations.  I also believed that choosing these documents would allow me to understand Hamilton’s true ideas about many of the choices he made as a politician since he would probably be more honest in his correspondence with his wife.  These documents are important because they include Alexander Hamilton’s honest feelings about what was occurring in his life. What I found throughout the letters was that he travelled frequently for work but seemed to always want to return home, which, for Hamilton, was with Eliza.  Hamilton writes extremely sweetly to his wife, and reading them were truly heartwarming at times.

One of Hamilton’s many letters to Eliza

I read through almost all of the documents available from this website to get a sense of what I wanted to use as my historical annotation piece, but I decided on the two I published for very specific reasons.  First of all, they are taken from the same date 23 years apart. Second of all, the first one took place within the week that Hamilton became George Washington’s second hand man. Finally, the last letter was written the day before his fatal duel with Aaron Burr.  These letters have helped me understand large, life-changing decisions that Hamilton made, giving me the brief summaries of his life that have a different perspective than the one that Miranda gives in his musical.

The duel between Burr and Hamilton

 

These letters have allowed me to challenge my ability to research and deeply understand American history in a way I’ve never had to before.  While I have enjoyed this research and newfound understanding of the founding fathers, I have struggled with finding sources for my document.  The requirement to find at least 20 sources, including five peer-reviewed, academic sources, has been difficult to fulfill. Since I’ve struggled with this, it would be really amazing if we could work as a class to compile a long and diverse list of peer-reviewed sources that we could turn to if we can’t find enough on our own.  In doing my research, I have already run into many sources that would prove more useful to other people’s research than to my own, and I believe that working collaboratively to share these resources could allow our historical annotations to be richer and more well-rounded.

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Blog Post 2 By JaQuez Jackson

June 4, 2018 by Jaquez Jackson

In this blog I will be disusing the historical document that I chose and why I felt that it’s importance Is vital in learning more about the different foundations of historical writings. Moreover, I chose President Washington’s Farewell Address. I chose this because for one it has to do with what was our then president and this moment in history was pivotal in creating the future of America as we know it today. What Washington did in the year of 1776 was revolutionize presidency forever in a way the most Americans would agree on. As Washington’s second term in office came to an end he was afraid of the fact that if he were to die while in office many Americans would think presidency was a lifetime deal. That idea was destroyed as he stepped down from office and came up with his two term theory. This theory was then developed into an Amendment and was followed upon by every single president that came after Washington. Personally, the research hasn’t been too much of a stress load for me. I’m a big fan of history so I feel rather confident in observing and taking in new facts/information that would help me in my annotation project. Research for this document is not hard to find for the most part, but you will have your challenges because everyday different things might take you in another direction which is difficult but nothing we all cant handle. By this being a such a popular moment in history there is so many different facts and things you can annotate on that its to a point where you have to pick a specific direction you want to go in and follow that direction. In closing, I find this project rather interesting and I cant wait to see myself improve in the stages of creating this annotation project!

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