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English 1102: Hamilton and Writing

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Remix and Adaptation Proposal

July 14, 2018 by Noah Hammond

by Noah Hammond

For my Remix and Adaptation project, I’m using the Cabinet Battle #1 and #2 songs from the soundtrack. I’m going to turn the debates between Hamilton and Jefferson into a series of tweets. This adaptation is taking the ideas of the founding fathers and putting them in a modern setting. With the current political situation, a lot of important discussions and ideas are visible to the public through the medium of Twitter or other social media applications. If Hamilton and Jefferson had their arguments on Twitter, what would that be like? How would the public react and would the outcome change?

The skills I need for this project are a certain level of knowledge about how to use Twitter as well as a familiarity with internet culture and trends. Thanks to this class’s usage of twitter, I have figured out how to do a lot of things that I didn’t know beforehand. However, I might have to look at arguments or disagreements that have been had over twitter, whether it be between two celebrities over some beef they have, or political opponents that want to be seen as “modern” and “current”.

The biggest challenge in this project will probably be converting Hamilton’s and Jefferson’s words into modern terms as well as keeping the tweets within the character limit.

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Blog Post 5: Ham4Ham Adaptation Analysis

July 5, 2018 by Grace Griggs

By Grace Griggs

One of my favorite of the Ham4Ham videos we discussed is “The Hamilton Children” where the cast of Fun Home were brought in to play Hamilton’s kids who weren’t featured in the show.

The main purpose of this Ham4Ham is probably just to be cute, but it also affects the tone of the show in an interesting way. Essentially, it is a continuation of Phillip Hamilton’s rap to include his seven siblings, only one of which was even mentioned in the show itself. Hamilton ends with Eliza working to tell Hamilton’s story and memorialize his contributions to the US government. Ultimately, Hamilton’s legacy is his work, just like he wanted it to be. Eliza’s belief that their family would be legacy enough (emphasized in “First Burn” from the Hamilton Mixtape) is never validated because the only one of their children we see dies young. This song changes that, though. Not only did Hamilton have many children, but each of them went on to do interesting, important things. From defending Aaron Burr’s second wife in their divorce to being Secretary of State, the Hamilton children were no slouches. Knowing this, it would be easy to argue that Eliza was right to say Hamilton’s legacy could be his family rather than just his work. Based only on the story of the show, it would be hard to say Hamilton’s legacy was anything other than his work. I think adding this song to the show itself would completely change the tone of the ending.

The mediums of the two pieces are essentially the same, with the main difference being production value, with the Ham4Ham show being live with no music and only one microphone. My main takeaway from this exercise is how the selective inclusion or exclusion of even somewhat unrelated historical details can significantly change the story being told and its tone. For my adaptation, I have to pull from some historical events that the show only briefly brushes over. This means I have freedom to choose what I include and what I leave out. It is important that I carefully consider the overall tone and purpose of my adaptation when I am choosing what to include in it.

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Life and Legacy

July 5, 2018 by Rahmel Bailey

By: Rahmel Bailey

The song “Who Lives, Who Dies, Who Tells Your Story” is the final song in the musical performance of Hamilton and acts as a grand finale to the play. It speaks about the legacy of Hamilton after his death and question who will keep it. In the mixtape a remix of the song was created called “Who Tells Your Story”, which has some similarities but a lot of changes from the original.

In the original song the entire cast is included and many of the founding fathers give their remarks of Hamilton which reflect how many tried to downplay Hamilton’s contributions to the founding of the country. It is clear that many didn’t want to give him any recognition, but only gave him some credit because his impact was undeniable. Jefferson is heard saying “I’ll give him this: his financial system is a work of genius”,  and Madison says “He took our country from bankruptcy to prosperity, I hate to admit it,”. The founding fathers only gave him credit for his undisputable contributions. In the rap song it differs because it follows Common and Black Thought talking about the legacy that they have set for themselves. Furthermore, in the main hook the singer asks “Who holds on to our lives”. The perspective of the remix is of Common and Black Thought talking about the legacy they will have, and the main singer asks the listener to think of their legacy. However, the original song talks of Hamilton’s legacy and how Eliza helped it.

In the original piece there is a large emphasis on time, almost as though the reason Eliza had to save Hamilton’s legacy was because he died early and wasn’t able to solidify his impact like the other founding fathers. However, the rappers Common and Black Thought contribute legacy to the contributions made while alive. Common asks if he will be remembered for his early album “Water For Chocolate” or “Resurrection”, and Black Thought mentions that his writing and raps will be most remembered about him.

The new form changes the viewers experience with the text because in the original we see that the legacy of Hamilton was up to everyone else after he died and is more of a historical song of how the story of Hamilton survived overtime. However, the remix makes the reader think of the legacy they will leave after they die. This is essential because it speaks directly to black and brown audiences and challenges them to chase success in their lives.

Because I am using the remix from the mixtape this analysis will help me create a video that fits with the overall meaning I found from the lyrics of the song. It taught me more about how a legacy can be affected after death.

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Blog Post 5

July 5, 2018 by Noah Hammond

by Noah Hammond

The song on the Hamilton Mixtape “Dear Theodosia” really stood out to me, since I’m a fan of Chance the Rapper. He is very versatile in his music talents, since he can rap as well as sing. In “Dear Theodosia,” Chance is singing a mellow song about a girl he loves and how committed he’s willing to be. Compared to the original song in the soundtrack, there is much more harmonization, since technology in the recording studio allows him to record and go back to layer his voice on top of itself, while in the musical they have to sing everything live.

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You can feel the emotion of the song clearly when it is sung by Chance, since he is a professional and does this for a living. Not that the actors in the Hamilton musical are not good singers, it’s just that they have to be able to act, sing and dance for an audience so they don’t need to convey all the meaning of the song in the music. Chance’s style showed through in this song as well. You get the feeling that he has gone through something similar to the character in the musical, so he can really relate and put himself into the song. That makes for even better quality music.

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Aaron Burr wants to dedicate himself to Theodosia, but he ends up being taken over by his political career and even goes so far as to kill one of his rivals; Hamilton. In the song, you can tell that he really cares for her and he wishes he could be there for her, but the events in the musical prevent him from doing that. The song takes place before Hamilton’s death, so the audience may know that Burr’s words end up being hollow, making it even sadder.

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Blog Post 5

July 5, 2018 by Kristen English

By: Kristen English

For my last blog entry, I have decided to compare the remix of My Shot from The Hamilton Mixtape to the original as a way to broaden my prospective for the final remix and adaptation project. The lyrics in the remixed adaptation of the song are from a modern viewpoint as they reference scenarios such as a “young tot applyin’ a sticker to his Spiderman lunchbox”, which obviously did not exist in Hamilton’s time era. The song is from the viewpoint of an oppressed modern day citizen who has to work hard to achieve his goals. The remixed version, much like the original, tells the story of a man who wants more out of his life and is not going to miss his chance to achieve his dreams and goals.

While both the original and the remixed piece have the same underlying argument of one fulfilling their dreams, the differing lyrics and delivery of each song give a different feel to each piece and evoke different emotions. Busta Rhymes’ remixed version is a classic hip-hop anthem telling the story of a young troubled man’s rise to fame through dedicated hard-work while out-lining the struggles he faces along the way. This theme is very common among hip-hop music and while the remixed song itself is very motivating in lyrics, the delivery of the song is smoother and more laid back than the original. Also, in comparison to the original version, which has a very upbeat and strong delivery, the remixed version tells the same story with the classic old-school hip-hop feel. The remixed version gives a different perspective on a classic piece with a classic storyline through the use of different lyrics and differing delivery. This is important because it shows viewers that no matter what era, people still face the same issues regarding oppression and the drive to succeed despite all odds. This story needs to be told because it sheds light on the topic of success through oppression, which can often be overlooked this day in age.

I believe reviewing the remixed version of this song has given me the different perspective that was needed for my project. As my project is telling the modern story of the song My Shot, this remixed version was perfect to analyze. The lyrics gave me insight into modern struggles that people from differing backgrounds can face and inspired my own ideas into how I am going to tell the story through my blog. While many argue that the original piece cannot be beat, I say that both are great for different purposes and I am glad to have taken the time to analyze both and broaden my knowledge and outlook on the topic.

 

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Blog Post 5 By: Kelton Dawson

July 5, 2018 by Kelton Dawson

When listening to the Hamilton Mix-tape it depicts a short summary on the life and more so overcoming of Hamilton and it helps bring a different form of understanding and comprehension to the original text. When put in the form of music it plays into a different type of audience it becomes more relatable and easier to follow. In our generation today we depend on music just for the completion of everyday task. When you change the text into a form that is more relevant it takes the “boredom” of reading and translates it to something that is engaging and easier to remember. The experience switches itself and the person now has this piece of material that they would be willing to share amongst peers and it becomes something that they are willing to make into a repetitive cycle of learning. This becomes important as the generations progress and way of living converts itself into the dependency of technology. We see that books and word text starts to become a thing of the past and finding new ways of keeping the upcoming generations engaged becomes more vital than ever. Even with the usage of plays younger audiences don’t seem interested in sitting through something that is not relevant to them.

 

The mix-tape is consistent with the text in the feelings and emotions of Hamilton not so much the events. The song “My shot” is more relatable to the newer generation bringing the struggles Hamilton faced with overcoming, taking risks and breaking the rules for the sake of America which in returns makes him one of Washington’s most reliable assets we can now convert that into everyday living. We now start to feel what he was going through and put our self in Alexander Hamilton’s shoes. That is why my shot was the perfect song to me

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Blog Entry 5

July 5, 2018 by Avery Showell

 

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By: Avery Showell 

Hamilton has been the key focus point of our class, and comes with remixes and adaptations that engage different thoughts, viewpoints and changes. I want to focus on The Hamilton Mixtape and the message that lies behind it. More closely, the song “Immigrants (We Get The Job Done)” and how it portrays the life, struggles, and sacrifice that they immigrants go through daily. Keinan Abdi Warsame, Claudia Alexandra Feliciano,  Rizwan Ahmed, René Pérez Joglar, Lin-Manuel Miranda, and Jeffrey Penalva did a great job of taking the song and finding lyrics that directly relate immigrants and voice there opinions and feelings through hip hop.

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Immigrants enter the US as outcasts. They progress toward becoming insiders when their disparities do not  influence the ways they communicate with others, the new gateways they have for themselves and their families, and how they partake in legislative issues. I agree, immigrants should be accepted in to our United States society because they prove they are hardworking and willing to go for their own. Being a US citizen does not consequently imply that people are being accepted.it is difficult to be an insider without having legitimate status as a man from others, and in any event the possibility to be a citizen. A lot of people in the U.S don’t accept the language of immigrants especially including the social, the economic, and the political side of the United States. “Look how far I come” is a great line to exemplify how immigrants have been more than enough in society today. We often forget the fact that immigrants have helped the United States since decades ago, and when they shine we often have do not like to portray the fact that they are in fact immigrants end excelling. The Hamilton Mixtape gives immigrants a shining light which they are years short on.

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Blog 5: An Analysis of “Wait for It” from the Hamilton Mixtape

July 5, 2018 by Zachary Frederick

By: Zac Frederick

When I listened to “Wait for It” from the Hamilton Mixtape, a remix by famous music artist Usher of the original “Wait For It” from the Hamilton Soundtrack, I was at first struck by how similar the two songs appear to be. To me, they both seemed to have similar sounding styles, and both are sung with the same rhythms and notes. Even the words are almost identical at nearly every part of the song, save a verse or two. However, another listen helped to point out some of the key differences of the original and the remix.

First and most notably, it is Usher who sings the song, and not Aaron Burr, the character who recites the song in the play. Usher has a different style for the song, a more pop-sounding style, which is also reflected in the music number as well. Usher gives the song a remix that listeners would be more familiar with having no context of the surrounding play of Hamilton. This difference is similar in this sense with one that is found later in the song. While the play version takes the third verse to direct the song at Hamilton’s personality and character saying that he “doesn’t hesitate [and] exhibits no restraint,” Usher’s remix leaves this bit out, opting to simply repeat the previous chorus. While this is a smaller detail in reality, it does point to the notion that Usher is generalizing the song to a broader audience. He doesn’t want to limit the song specifically to those who are familiar with Hamilton, and by leaving this out Usher allows the song to become more relatable to the general listener. The song distances itself from the plot of the show, and becomes more of a general lesson as a whole. In this sense, the song looses a significant asset when evaluating its importance.

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Blog 5

July 5, 2018 by Ye Jun Kim

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By Ye Jun Kim

When a show or anything that can be spread through media becomes popular, remixes and adaptations of the original piece emerge on the web. Similarly, the musical Hamilton has received multiple forms of remxes and adaptations.
One I thought was very interesting and unique was mixing the musical and another popular film to create a new work. More specifically, The mix between the Disney movie Mulan and Hamilton was very interesting. The author of this remix took the ever-so-confident characteristics that both exist in Lafeyette and Yao, and inserted the Hamilton characters in the Mulan settings.
The mix between the two pieces does not really help with making the story easier to understand, but I think that this allowes us to approach the characters in a more comfortable way. Since, for a lot of us, Mulan is a childhood movie, it is easier for us the connect with the characters in Mulan. However, Hamilton is about history after all, so it would seem harder to connect to and feel attached to the characters. By mixing the two allows us to look at the characters in Hamilton a different way, perhaps in a more casual way, thinking of them less as historical figures and more as people just like us.
I’ve mentioned this artwork in my Adaptation and Remix proposal as well, but I plan on using this as reference to create my rendition of Hamilton. Through looking at this piece, I was able to determine how I can go about working on mine and that I need to focus more on the characters itself than the event, since a lot of the times, the events are not as significant as the characters characteristics, especially if they are not the main characters.

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Blog Post Five: Ham4Pamphlet

July 5, 2018 by Ian Byers

By: Ian Byers

For this last blog entry, I’ve chosen to talk a bit about Ham4Pamphlet, as the whole project is very interesting to me. It is a visual interpretation of Hamilton, but one that is quite varied, as it was made by numerous different artists. However, Hamilton, being a Broadway show, already has a very prominent  visual aspect, with its casting and choreography being some of its most praised features. Despite this, fan art of Hamilton is extremely popular. I took some time to think about why this was, and one of the ideas I came up with was that not everyone was able to see a full performance of the show, especially soon after it had premiered. So, it makes sense that many fans who had only heard the songs of the show and seen some clips of the live performance were inspired to make their own visual interpretations of the characters. I don’t know if this is necessarily why fan art of this show flourished, but it’s just an idea I had.

Although I don’t think that the Ham4Pamphlet project as a whole makes an argument about the show, individual pieces of art featured in it do. The entire project, though, shows that people who have different interpretations of the show and its meaning can still work together and collaborate to produce a very high quality fan work. This allows for all fans of the show to get a broad overview of some common opinions on parts of the show, and relate to how these affected other fans.

 

The illustration for “Your Obedient Servant” was my personal favorite out of all 46. In regards to my own adaptation, this gives me a good idea of some popular ways in which fans of the show like to express their appreciation of it. Hopefully, this will allow me to create something that more people will also be able to relate to and understand, while also adding my own personal touch.

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